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15 August 2007 @ 11:55 pm
Not Yours - (Ficlet)  
Title: Not Yours
Timing: Pre-Series
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Fledge!Spike/Angelus
Summary: After a brutal assault from Angelus, Dru is comforted by Spike. Daddy's not happy, at all. Spike pays the price. 
Warnings: Graphic language and sexual content. There be non-con and a bit of torture this way. If you’re squicked, turn away.

A/N: Written for feedmykink’s “hot or sweet” challenge, which called for one scene of plotless kink. I’ve always wanted to write a bit of Fanged Four. First slash fic, and first time writing Angelus and Dru, yay!
 
Thanks to Eowyn315 for her beta work. 

Disclaimer: The characters are the property of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy. No profit is gained from my writerly endeavors and no copyright infringement is intended.
 
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It was like being doused in holy water, except the burning ate him from the inside out. Spike would have screamed if he could, but for once he was glad for the gag.
 
Huddled in the corner by the fireplace, Dru sat with her hands over her ears, rocking slightly and letting out pitiful whimpers. Her petticoats were a mess of tangles where they had been shredded; her feet, just peeking out from below the hem, still bleeding from the little cuts that the broken brandy snifter had opened. She was sporting a shiner that spread wide across her left cheekbone. He wanted her to look at him, wanted to prove that he was better than this, that the sick sod couldn’t beat him.
 
“If ya don’t stop puttin’ up such a fight, William, I’ll do the same to her. Do ya want that?”
 
Drusilla shook her head frantically and covered her eyes.
 
Spike struggled all the harder, but the ropes held him fast – there was no breaking loose. If Angelus was nothing else, he was a sure hand with knots.
 
Hogtied with his wrists and ankles secured high over his back, all he could do was squirm futilely on his belly. But Da wasn’t having any of his antics tonight. Angelus planted a firm foot on his back and crouched over him to force his cheeks apart and work each knot of garlic into his rectum slowly and meticulously. Spike thought he might bite through the gag when the wire on which the garlic was strung pinched something; inside or out, he couldn’t tell.
 
“Aren’t you just a splendid martyr tonight?” Angelus said, giving him a shove in the ribs with his heel. Spike could smell the scent of his grand-sire’s rising arousal and shut his eyes. He didn’t want to meet the knowing grin that the bastard was likely sporting.
 
Angelus chuckled deep in his throat, and brushed a hand harshly through Spike’s tussled hair. Perhaps if he truly wanted to punish him, he’d shave his pretty golden locks completely off.
 
“You won’t sit for a week, boy. I’ll be keepin’ ye on your hands and knees for me.” His other huge paw worked itself into his pants to fist his cock and work himself off.
 
Only a week was a generous estimate. Spike guessed more like three weeks by the feel of his smoldering guts. He cried out wildly despite himself, his innards searing, and then his back, too, when the nasty old blighter laid the switch to him.
 
Angelus caught him eyeing Drusilla again and reached down to jerk his hair back. “You don’t touch her, tend to her, or drink from her unless I say so.” When Spike wouldn’t take his eyes from her, Angelus struck a harsh blow across his face. “What a sorry capon you are, doting on her like a ninny.”
 
Letting his head drop back, he slid his hand softly down Spike’s back to palm his balls. They were drawn up tight. “Don’t make me have t’ un-man you, William. Though, perhaps I might like you better as a girl,” he crooned, stroking his finger over his arsehole.
 
On the last word he yanked the garlic beads out of him, dropped to his knees and dragged Spike back fully onto his cock.
 
Dru’s face was a mess of tears, her lips reciting the mantra Daddy, no silently to herself. She was a bad girl, a bad girl for letting her prince care for her after Daddy’s punishment. Must never let him - never, ever again.
 
As consciousness became a difficult thing to cling to, Spike’s attention was drawn to the slight movement at the other end of the closed door. Through a crack, Darla stood, a wicked smile lighting her face.
 
 
A/N: Capon - A young, neutered rooster
 
 
 
ldyavalonldyavalon on August 16th, 2007 10:02 am (UTC)
Wow, harsh!!!

Awesome drabble ;)
ClawofCat: smugclawofcat on August 16th, 2007 05:13 pm (UTC)
Heh, heh. Thanks, hun. I had that idea for the garlic beads and I figured, "well, I ain't never putting this in an actual fic, so lets use it here." And who better to come up with something as perverse as that than Angelus?

BTW, love your pretty icon. Tam did a real bang-up job with that manip.
ldyavalonldyavalon on August 16th, 2007 05:21 pm (UTC)
It had to be an Angelus idea, of course.

Isn't she awesome?? I'm so in love with my icon I've showed it to all my non-LJ friends too. I must be bordering the irritating right now XD
ash_carpenterash_carpenter on August 16th, 2007 10:24 am (UTC)
So...I guess you decided not to go with "sweet" then...? *g*

Wow, this is so vivdly described and great! I LOVE it when Angelus is such a bastard, and Spike's defiance is awesome. How typical of Angelus to manipulate him by threatening to hurt Dru.

And Darla! The bitch! Heee - this was so wrong...Loved it!
ClawofCat: darlaclawofcat on August 16th, 2007 05:17 pm (UTC)
*grins* Was it that obvious I didn't go with sweet? I had the idea for the garlic beads, and I knew I would never actually write a fic with it, so I thought it was best to use it here. I thought this might have been a little brutal and was anxious about posting it, but I'm glad you liked evil, bastardly Angelus. *reminscing* Yours was so good.

Darla's reaction is sort of ambiguous, but I wanted to loosely imply that she was the one to spill the beans to Angelus that Spike was caring for Dru. Bitch, indeed! *snarls at her*
darkdreams1222dreamsofspike on August 16th, 2007 02:14 pm (UTC)
wow...in such a brief work, you managed to capture all four characters so perfectly...and poor spike, so very sad all that he went through for dru...and you make me feel such sympathy for poor mad dru as well...great job with this, love :)
ClawofCat: Dru gazeclawofcat on August 16th, 2007 05:24 pm (UTC)
It's funny. Whenever I write these dark fics, I always have you in the back of my mind. I'm your secret alcolyte or something.

Really glad you dug the characterization on them. I've never written Angelus or Dru, so I was a bit anxious about it all. It took me forever to find a word for Angelus to use meaning homosexual without it sounding like a word Spike would use. Damn you, Victorian slang online dictionaries! *shakes fist*

I like how throughout it, Spike never lets himself lose his concentration. Dru grounds him throughout the entire ordeal. And the poor dear really has a tough time of it. The boys really should learn to share. Thanks for reading and commenting!
darkdreams1222dreamsofspike on August 16th, 2007 05:33 pm (UTC)
lol...yeah, the fanged four can be tricky, it's not an easy dynamic to capture...hey, i'm almost done with the second half of your ficcie, love :) i hope you like it though i'm not sure how it's turning out exactly :P lol...we'll see i guess...should be later today :P
ClawofCat: basement spuffyclawofcat on August 16th, 2007 05:46 pm (UTC)
Oh, goodie! I'm going to be traveling for a few hours this evening to visit a friend, so I probably won't get a chance to read it until tomorrow. I'm sure it will be grand though.
billysgirl5billysgirl5 on November 12th, 2007 07:34 am (UTC)
well, we all know that dru isn't all there to begin with, but it almost seems like darla might have had a hand in dru letting spike take care of her after her daddy punished her. angelus was harsh, but i really can't see him any other way. he's possessive, and no one touches what is his. man, gotta love angelus!
ClawofCat: angeldruclawofcat on November 13th, 2007 10:59 pm (UTC)
Oh, Darla definately had a hand in this unfortunate scenario. I tried to imply that it was, in fact, Darla that spilled the beans to Angelus that Spike was tending to Dru. Jealousy and power plays abound with the Fanged Four.

Hee, yeah, Angelus isn't very good at sharing, especially when it's his favorite toy. He doesn't much like defiance either. Poor Spike certainly got the bad end of this encounter.

Thanks for reading! Out of curiosity, where did you come across this fic?
billysgirl5billysgirl5 on November 14th, 2007 05:39 am (UTC)
well, basically i got off work early yesterday and just bounced around from journal to journal checking things out (i'm fairly new to lj). i somehow ended up at the forbiddenawards community. your story is listed under the The Pleasure Chest Award category.
The Anti-OTPsnowpuppies on December 1st, 2007 11:57 pm (UTC)
Holy hell!

The garlic beads are a new thing! Very Clever. And sadistic.

Wow.

*shivers*
ClawofCat: special hellclawofcat on December 2nd, 2007 12:17 am (UTC)
*evil grin* I'm terrible. I remember I was on vacation this summer sitting on the beach with a notebook thinking of various kinks I could try out. For some ungodly reason, this idea crossed my mind. And when I thought about it, who else would think of something as perverse as that other than Angelus? Hence, this ficlet was born.

Bless prompts. Sometimes you're able to hit on something particularly entriguing.
little_dumpling: Spangel! xDlittle_dumpling on March 21st, 2008 02:03 pm (UTC)
raow! that was nice and sadistically hot. me likie.

i have really enjoyed the few pieces of yours i have read so far! it actually makes me sad this is the only A/S fic you have. i could see you doing this pairing great justice... so you have yourself a new fangirl! *wanders off to read more*
ClawofCat: spangelclawofcat on March 21st, 2008 03:14 pm (UTC)
Hee hee, you know, I'm still embarassed by this piece. I was shaking in my boots to post it originally, but it seems there are plenty who like the dirtybadwrong just fine.

That's great to hear you've been enjoying my work. You're the second person this week to tell me they hoped I wrote more slash. What a compliment! I wouldn't be surprised if I wrote Spangel again in the future.

Happy reading! I should have a new Spike-centric ficlet up this weekend.
flake_sakeflake_sake on March 22nd, 2008 08:32 am (UTC)
I think I already read this one a while ago on feedmykink but I was an evil soulless lurk who didn't comment back then.

It's really dark and mean and very intense. I like it a lot how Angelus is the perfect picture of evil in your story. Makes sense that he hates the connection between Spike and Dru.
ClawofCat: angelus smokesclawofcat on March 22nd, 2008 04:37 pm (UTC)
lol, oh honey, I think everyone was a lurker at some point. I wouldn't be too hard on yourself =)

This ficlet marked an interesting turn in my fanfic writing. Up until this point I had been writing almost exclusively 3000-6000 word one shots. When I saw how much you can actually cram into 750 words or so, my fics started to get shorter too. I mean, I don't attach rules to these things. I write as much as the scene/story calls for - that can be 500 words or that can 3000 words - but a trend was def started as a result of this challenge. And I really ought to write evil Angelus again. He's a hoot!
mendenbar01mendenbar01 on April 27th, 2008 06:07 pm (UTC)
Like the garlic buds. Sabre shadowkitten has a story where they use a perforated dildo filled with holy water.
ClawofCat: Spike breakmeclawofcat on April 27th, 2008 08:58 pm (UTC)
Yeah, those garlic beads, a vampire's worst nightmare. Leave it to Angelus to cook something that perverse up. I've never read any of Sabre's work since I'm not really a slash fan, but I hear that she did a lot of firsts and covered many kinky bases. The perforated dildo certainly sounds like an inventive creation.
Butterflysnogged on September 10th, 2009 02:26 am (UTC)
Sadistic, dark, and evil

What a perfect combo!
ClawofCat: angelus fangyclawofcat on September 10th, 2009 04:59 am (UTC)
Absolutely! This fic is quite an oldy of mine, but whenever I look back at it I adore my characterization of Angelus. I love him evil and bastardly. The way he was portrayed on the show never quite lived up to my expectations of Ultimate Evil, so it's up to us to show what a depraved psychopath he really was. *wistful sigh* I gotta write me some more Angelus.
Kiki Maykikimay on December 22nd, 2011 12:47 pm (UTC)
Great fic!
I love the dinamycs between Darla, Angelus, Spike and Dru. In this fic is clear that Darla and Angelus are the sadistic, sociopathic ones, while Dru and Spike are more human and sentimental.
Poor Drusilla and poor, poor Spike!
ClawofCat: family funclawofcat on November 5th, 2012 04:31 am (UTC)
Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed this look into the Fanged Four. It was great fun to write an evil, sadistic Angelus. In retrospect, you really have to wonder why Angel didn't have more of a protege. There was Penn, but he didn't seem to travel with them as a family unit like Dru and Spike did. Perhaps Angelus could not have abided to have any competition in his household or usurping of his authority.
Kiki May: Lessonskikimay on November 5th, 2012 11:06 am (UTC)
I think so. But also it's all about his sadistic impulses, that compels him to find always another victim and to get bored of the previous. (I'm sorry for me english!)
ClawofCatclawofcat on November 7th, 2012 07:20 pm (UTC)
So true! He definitely has that need to feel power and to victimize.